文书干货 | 个人陈述开头怎么写?试试这几种方式!(上)
什么是好的文章开头呢?
通常一篇文章的开头有几种形式:
1. 讲故事
相比于听道理,人类似乎总是能被故事吸引,所以很多文章的开头都采用讲故事的方式。故事性的开头一句话就是一个场景,给整篇文章定调。
《边城》沈从文
由四川过湖南去,靠东有一条官路。这官路将近湘西边境,到了一个地方名叫“茶峒”的小山城时,有一小溪,溪边有座白色小塔,塔下住了一户单独的人家。这人家只一个老人,一个女孩子,一只黄狗。
2. 总结性开头
总结性的开头就是在文章的最开始,开门见山地给出见解和结论,让读者知道文章的立场和主旨。
《三国演义》罗贯中
正文第一句话:话说天下大势,分久必合,合久必分。
3. 悬疑开头
埋下伏笔,制造悬念,引人入胜。
《檀香刑》莫言
那天早晨,俺公爹赵甲做梦也想不到再过七天他就要死在俺的手里;死得胜过一条忠于职守的老狗。
4. 自然叙述开头
看是是平淡无奇的开头,实则是作者想跟读者说的第一句话。
《了不起的盖茨比》费茨杰拉德
在我年轻、幼稚的时候,父亲曾给了我一番教诲,我一直铭记在心:‘每当你想要批评别人的时候’,他对我说,‘你就记住在这世界上不是人人都享有过你所拥有的优越条件’。
如何才能写出一个好的PS开头?
1. 个人轶事
The first lesson I learned as a student pilot is that left and right don’t exist. Maybe driving on a highway or in a parking lot, left and right is precise enough to describe the location and movements of slow-moving bikers, pedestrians, and cars. But at 36,000 feet in the air in a steel tube hurdling almost 200 miles an hour? Left and right just don’t cut it.
2. 开门见山
Example 1: My interest in science dates back to my years in high school, where I excelled in physics, chemistry, and math. When I was a senior, I took a first-year calculus course at a local college (such an advanced-level class was not available in high school) and earned an A. It seemed only logical that I pursue a career in electrical engineering.
Example 2: Having majored in literary studies (world literature) as an undergraduate, I would now like to concentrate on English and American literature.
3. 自问自答
I subscribe to what the New York Times dubs “the most welcomed piece of daily e-mail in cyberspace.” Cat pictures? Kardashian updates? Nope: A Word A Day. Out of the collection of diverse words I received, one word stuck out to me in particular.
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